Point commission for =
MisterTwister123Also a remake of:

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Ugggh my mouse jacked up during this.
Whelp, this took a while o_o
From 9:00 to about 12:00
Oh, also, I tried a knew shading technique. Let me know how you like it.
Hope you like it Twister and Blackout.
Please comment before fav-ing.
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Characters: Rigidedge =MisterTwister123 © Blackclaw =Blackclawxx ©
Artist: Me ©
Made with sumofm
But don't give up. You are a great young artist. In the future, your art will be hanged up in museums.
There is alot of great effort you put into this.
The color and shading is just right, and I always love how you put a glow to the eyes of animal's you draw.
Although,
Blackclaw's shoulder is a little far too down,
A slightly upward change would be better,
but it's your choice if you want to, or not.
The eyes are just beautiful with that glow,
Especially light blue,
Or grey.
The chest fur on Rigidedge could let a slight change down towards his arm,
Showing where it starts and ends.
Other than that it's perfect.
Great job,
And keep up the awesome work!
~R4DI04CT1V3
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