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Also a remake of:
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Ugggh my mouse jacked up during this.

Whelp, this took a while o_o
From 9:00 to about 12:00

Oh, also, I tried a knew shading technique. Let me know how you like it.

Hope you like it Twister and Blackout. Please comment before fav-ing.
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Characters: Rigidedge =MisterTwister123 © Blackclaw =Blackclawxx ©
Artist: Me ©
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:iconantiarttheftangela:
Fur bangs and anime eyes. Typical warrior cat drawing. Yet you are improving. You have some of th criterias of a cat right. The grey fur on the black cat's chest is all patched up. Add some more texture to it, dont overdo it. There is some pink on the brown cat's ear ._. You do perfect blushing but remove the lines. Lower the fur variety on the side of the cat's face so it can look more realistic. Um. About the whiskers. If you want it to be more cute. Please move the whiskers where a real cat's whiskers are supposed to be instead of leaving it lying in mid-air. The white you drew on the cats' fur bangs is kind of sloppy. But extend it to show more value. The fur hanging out on the black cat's left side of the chest should be lowered.

But don't give up. You are a great young artist. In the future, your art will be hanged up in museums. :)
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:iconr4di04ct1v3:
This is a great picture you drew, Misty! I love your art.
There is alot of great effort you put into this.
The color and shading is just right, and I always love how you put a glow to the eyes of animal's you draw.
Although,
Blackclaw's shoulder is a little far too down,
A slightly upward change would be better,
but it's your choice if you want to, or not.
The eyes are just beautiful with that glow,
Especially light blue,
Or grey.
The chest fur on Rigidedge could let a slight change down towards his arm,
Showing where it starts and ends.
Other than that it's perfect.
Great job,
And keep up the awesome work!
~R4DI04CT1V3 :iconr4di04ct1v3:
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~ataylor8 Feb 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is not a professional critique but this picture is so cute! Amazing really amazing X3
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:iconmistystarx:
*Mistystarx Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you <3
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:iconataylor8:
~ataylor8 Feb 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Np! ^_^
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:iconmodethewoulfie:
=MODEthewoulfiE Feb 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I love how you do the blushes xD
SUPER CUTE
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:iconmistystarx:
*Mistystarx Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you <3
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:iconmodethewoulfie:
=MODEthewoulfiE Feb 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Np!
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:iconiceclaw-12:
epic i got nothing else to say but : OMG OMG OMG I LOVE IT I WISH I WAS THIS AWESOME AT DRAWING ; ; JELLY BELLY random
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:iconmistystarx:
*Mistystarx Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you xD
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:iconcresentsky:
~cresentsky Feb 19, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Cute! :)
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